WALT understand how to write a good scene for our narrative

Read the given passage. Copy paste this passage on to google drawing. Highlight the words that indicate what the scene looks like, smells like, feels like and where is it situated in the story.

Write a sentence or two to describe the picture that the writer paints in your head.

They walked on in frosty silence. Far above, the sun was setting over the Alps, tinting the snowy peaks a soft pink. Kea wheeled high above the fringes of the forest. The air was cool and smelt of dirt and leaves. Charlie couldn’t enjoy any of it.

Sourced from - Junior Journal, May 2017, L3

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What could Charlie see - the sun setting, Alps, Kea

What could he smell - the dirt and leaves

What could he feel - awkward ( frosty silence)

the turtle and the shark

Long ago there was a man and a woman that lived on an island. The name off the woman was called foniea. But the man was lost and forgotten. They were committed together and loved them both.

The man was called away to fonualei. A he could never return to that island ever again. They fled off to fonualei. They lived many months off an high chief named  metua. He didn't have that much kindness in him. They didn't have that much peace the island. It was shortly peace only. Then it was time to jump off the cliff. Then when they jumped off the cliff they were now the turtle and the shark.

WALT describe our scene for our narrative

I heard the splashing off the waves smashing on to the big gigantic rocks. The sand felt squashed under my toes. The blue salty water sent a wave off freshness through my mind. The water was crystal clear, shining off the bright sun and the breeze felt nice. I heard the bluebirds tweeting in the palm trees. Suddenly a slimy seaweed wrapped around my legs and gave me a fright.

describing the scene

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characters setup

Wal to know our characters after our first reading.

Character off Matiu	He was a scared off heights boy. Because he was scared of heights and excited to do the bungy jump.
Character of Uncle Hone	He was a confident man. Because he wanted to do the bungy jump. At the top off the west tower.
Character off Pania	She was a brave and a confident girl. Because she wasn't scared of heights. She was very eager and excited to jump off the west tower.

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